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I've been toying with this idea for almost four years now, (I was originally going to animate it back when I did a lot of animating) the story has always stayed the same I've just never really sat down and drawn it out. I tried once but never got past the first page. So I'm trying again. c:

Of course I had to remake the first page because the other one was just... pure cringe
Old first page:

Anyway I'm planning on really doing this all now, I really want to do it. c: I'll need to remake the cover too, I'll get around to that.

Next page--> Coming soon
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:iconxnikkiroseletta:
*xNikkiroseletta Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
*EXCITEMENT*
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*PulseMutt Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sit doon ya spoon.
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:iconhallethefox:
*random comment is random feel free to disregard* The white ones eye& hair combo.....reminds me of L from Deathnote O___O
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*PulseMutt Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
...I had to google that.
Hahaha, they do actually. o: I see where you got that from! c:
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:iconhallethefox:
xD Yay Im not crazy XD
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:iconfadedfoxes:

wow, maJOR improvment from your last one.
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*PulseMutt Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! ;w;<3
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~Kaykao Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh... A comic? Hm. Sounds pretty interesting so far, and the characters and everything look great! I'll be looking forward to the next page. :D

The only thing I have for advice is the backgrounds; unless thay're on a hill above everything you would see some more distant grass or even just a green blob somewhere just over the horizon you have there... It looks kind of like everyone's on the edge of the world right now.

But otherwise the characters don't have too many anatomy flaws and the test and everything isn't hard to see.
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*PulseMutt Dec 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
mmm c: I've had the storyline in my head for yonks, never really sat down and got around to drawing it. c: Glad you're enjoying it so far though!

Ah yes, backgrounds how I hate them. Though they are sitting on a hill. x'D So I'm glad that it came across that way, you should see why in the next page. c: Though I suppose if I had made it seem more rounded or shown some kind of green beneath it would have made it more obvious...

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*HickoryBlue Dec 22, 2012   Digital Artist
D`aww
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